why do we critize

why do we critize

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~

Why do we critize?

Why do we hate?

Why is there not a single person that will help out?

Why cant we all be friends?

Why cant there be a nice person to see the critize?

So When you see that help out be a friend in need.

© 2010 ~ Otto Girl ~


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Exactly :)
I'm trying to get more people to be positive well! Good luck, and keep on truckin'.


Posted 14 Years Ago


Good piece. Questionable, nice ending but from your other works I've seen you could have made a stronger impact on the last two lines .
(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hate seems to be something that is imposed upon us of late, we hate for reasons that are becoming more unclear as the days go by! xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


awww i agree im requesting every 1 to read this

Posted 14 Years Ago


i hope you like it. This is not as good as all my others ones but i am tired of all the critizism that goes on in the world.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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