Bring in the light

showing you that you can be you

In this life we bring faith of hope and peace

But at times we show sadness

Hoping to bring light and love

But all you feel is Dread

Bring in that light

show the world that you can be you

Show them your Bright and shiny

Live your life the way you want.

Reviews

[*Always be Me:)*]

very nice poem. ur starting to be creative with ur poems. :) keep doing a good job :)

[Angelwithabeard]

way cool. it brings forth a new thing. keep writing.

[Tate Morgan]

Very nice

[Not A Writer]

You bring your point clearly: be who you wanna be. Good job in expressing that thought in a poetic-like manner.

[Elaine]

This shows me an opptimistic person. I like it. In the 7th line you're should be changed