Drive my mind crazy

Everytime i think of you my mind goes crazy

I want you close to me holding me tight

Your smell drives me up the wall

I want to kiss you

Baby show me you care

Baby give me your attention

Baby tell me you love me

I love you my baby

 

Reviews

[*Always be Me:)*]

thats a really cute poem. nice emotion :)

[*~Kristy~*]

Awsome! Love the change!

[*~Kristy~*]

You may want to change or take out the line "I want you close to me holding close," unless it was intentionally placed there. If it was not intetnional maybe change the last Close to Tight? I don't want to tell you what to do though, so it is onlly a simple suggestion, nothing more.

Overall, however, it was a very short poem, but very well worded. I liked it.