Baby i want you here

Baby i want you here

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~
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Its about love

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i hear the wind the rain

baby i need you here to hold me close

Im scared weak

all i can hear is the creak

Baby i need your body against mine

the warmth of your hands in mine

Baby stay i want you here

in the dark or in the Rain

I love you baby

Stay and and keep me alive.

© 2010 ~ Otto Girl ~


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nice nice poem. you didnt put an R on the you lol. but nice poem hun.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This paints a cute imagine with the rain and everything. Hear is spelled wrong in the first line.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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~ Otto Girl ~
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