Love

Love

A Poem by ~ Otto Girl ~
"

this is what i think of love

"

Love is full of happy thoughts

full of hearts beating 30 miles an hour

where there soft lips on yours and

that smell you breath everytime you hug them

love is full oftrust and honesty

when you can rely on them when your angry or sad

Love is when you miss them despertaly when they are gone

and think about them constantaly

love is communicating and getting to know one another

love is unpredictable

when each suprise each other

love is cute

when your fingers fit through there hands

and when he holds you close to show you he is there.

 

© 2010 ~ Otto Girl ~


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I know that you are new, but I think that you will go far. I mean, there are grammar mistakes, of course, but who cares about that...The words are gorgeous! I stink at writing love poems... I'm always trying to write one for my boyfriend, but I always hate them and throw them away...:(

You, however, are good!

Posted 14 Years Ago


love !! is there any better subject to inspire poems !

Posted 14 Years Ago



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