rosary beads

rosary beads

A Poem by Sage Gabrielle
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thinking about it, this poem can take on a double meaning. hmph.

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I mended my broken rosary beads.
Each and every bead hugged their very own metal link.
I didn’t have to worry about the potential mess I could’ve made.

All it took
was a little push
and pull.
A little levering
and it was a good as new.

Wouldn’t it be nice if that’s all it took?
A little push and pull,
A little lift,
and we would be as good as new. 

© 2013 Sage Gabrielle


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A big idea kept simple makes the idea stand out all the more. Recovering from a life crisis we may be tempted to force matter too much. When in reality things tend to work themselves out. For our part having a humble and willing attitude is often all we need.

A little push...a little pull...Intended or not, I think you found a bit of truth in the metaphor.

Nice work on this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh my, this is excellent as well! It spoke to me on a personal and deep level. thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


My mom has a pair of rosary beads she carries with her everywhere she goes. if she ever lost them or broke them. she'd be breakin more than just the beads.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Sage Gabrielle
Sage Gabrielle

Freeport, NY



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Hi there. Sage here. I'm 18 and soon I'll be living in the Queens area for college as a music education major in the fall. I spend most of my nights burning candles and trying to figure everything.. more..

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