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A Poem by Sage Gabrielle
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"Doubt is the heart of the matter." -- Graham Greene

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I still have some rosary beads a lover long ago gave me.
He said he was cleaning a garden and found them.
A lady lending her own helping hand said they were a sign from God
and were intended for him.
He instead said
they were intended for me
and nestled them in the palms of my hands.

Although I do not believe anymore,
every time I touch them, there is a
certain energy around me.
They broke a while ago.
Maybe I was careless.
But even so,
I still feel this
certain electricity
flowing through this broken circuit,
defying the very fundamental laws
of this universe. 

© 2013 Sage Gabrielle


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This poem tells a deep story. It is well written and just long enough to accomplish its purpose. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this. The last lines are powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 13, 2013
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Tags: faith, rosary beads, electricity, energy, universe

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Sage Gabrielle
Sage Gabrielle

Freeport, NY



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Hi there. Sage here. I'm 18 and soon I'll be living in the Queens area for college as a music education major in the fall. I spend most of my nights burning candles and trying to figure everything.. more..

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