Where we overlap.

Interest.

I used to live in the real world,
never realized that it was so cold.
Then one day i left from that place,
Questions asked, nothing traced.
Now i live in a new world, not heaven nor hell,
Yet still stuck in a living Cell.
My world is on top of yours
Yet your world has no open doors,
Ours do, we can come in and out as we please.
Yet none of you will ever see.
See my world is in between death and the living,
somewhere in the distant.
You get here when the process heads wrong.
The wait to heaven grows even more long.
For you are invisible to the people.
dead or alive, you're neither.
And that is where my world overlaps yours.
With only one way doors.
We wonder why we never travel back to reality though,
Possibly since reality is as blurred as snow.
Scarier from the outside, then ours.
Since your society is what devours.
You're living souls and keeps us here.
Maybe that's what's not so clear.
The real world is too big of a map,
and for us we would rather stay in this world.
The one that overlaps.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Cassie-Tastrophy]

You've got talent :)

[Dreamer<3]

Wow...Not only was it a good poem w/clever rhymes and stuff...but it was also kind of a story. Takes talent. You've got it. I liked it.

[Stormy Weather]

I like how your rhyming pattern is similar to some of mine :) I like it. Good job.

[Kayla :)]

:O that was really good. lol :)

[StarSandwich]

This gives on some sort shes a mortal.... but became the un-dead but hes an angel who keeps the peace in her new world and she can feel him she knows hes arround sometimes when hes there the world overlap. Thats the feel I'm getting :) Good write

[Lily Mae]

I'm maybe way off but the sense I get is like lost souls? Kind of like having been dead and yet wandering earth feeding off the energy of others.. hmmm.. lol.. But I'm strange that way.. Great write ...x