Dwell on the Past

Don't do it... haha

In the past are dreams come true,
It's where things belonged to you,
And to the past it is gone,
for dwelling on it,
is far too wrong.
It's the future that should catch your eye,
For looking back at feelings that died,
that's not where your heart belongs,
look straight ahead,
is where it belongs.
Those feelings are dead like corpses Buried deep,
Old characters those corpses keep.
The Past are things cannot be undone,
Sometime scary,
and you cannot run.
Though i said the feelings there fade,
The reality still can raid.
Don't dwell on the past, dears.
Look above at the things ahead
for the past is useless fears.
Don't look back at where you are not
Sometimes looking can get you caught,
in weeks or months of time
You cannot be saved from
The past eats on whats out of line.

Don't dwell on the past my dear,
for those are the most useless fears.

Author's Note

I really do want you to listen to me. Review?

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"Though i said the feelings there fade,
The reality still can raid.
Don't dwell on the past, dears."
That was my favorite part from the poem because it focuses on the reality that we have to move on. Those feelings that bother someone's conscious never fade away but they can be surpassed if one decides to move on for only then they won't be so blind to see the true world itself.

[Babieegirl]

@Blue Moon Ice Cream. Thanks, but it's actually are.. Haha. THanks for the reviews thoou! (=

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Good advice--this is a lesson I learned from experience a couple years ago. I haven't seen that rhyme scheme in a while; very neat. In the first line, "are" should be "our." (Sorry, it just bugs me when I see a typo right off the start.)

[*[_Natasha_]*]

i liked it, nice job!

[TJ]

all i can really say abou this is it's a great poem with a great lesson that everyone should listen to.
put the past in the past and move forward

[Cassie-Tastrophy]

I really like all of your writing. This one, especially because I can relate to it :)

[StarSandwich]

Hehee, :D another good one. This is giving me idead as your poems usually leave bits and bobs glowing arround in my head. Okay, I like this one the 'Don't dwell on the past my dear, for those are the most useless fears.' was just genius :D Loved it and yet so true. Alot of people do dwell on the past far to often. Good write :D