Make it Real

off the bat poem

You're fake.
You're dumb.
You won't make it far enough.
You're not tough enough.
Just.
SHUT UP.
I'm not sitting on my a*s.
Doing s**t that won't get me anywhere.
You see these people?
They're F****N' up.
And i'm below them?
Doesn't make sense.
I'm fake?
When's the last time you told the truth?
Bro, sit the f**k down.
I'm done.
Don't underestimate me.
You think you know me.
I'll make this real.
I'll make you feel.
The s**t you made me feel.
Don't worry,
when i get out of here.
Down below
Under them all,
I'll knock them all off
Like Mario brothers.
S**t.
I'm sorry about the cussin'
I'm just mad about this.
How can you get to the top
with all the people pulling you down?
You gotta be strong.
You have to want it
Believe in it .
You gotta want
TO MAKE IT REAL.

Author's Note

Fuck the haters that pull you down, do what you want and follow your dreams. Look ast cinderella. She's living the good life after living through hell. (=

Reviews

[*[_Natasha_]*]

nice one!

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

This pome is great! I like how it shows your point of veiw STRONGER than the haters. :)
p.s The cussin's ok in my book & thanx I can relate. (:

[TJ]

Wow this was so angry and gritty and wonderful. I love you're writing because of your in-your-face grit! Your poetry is awesome. You need to freestyle and send me a video

[StarSandwich]

Yep, Screw Haters. xD This poem says a lot and gets to your point, loved it. Be who you are not what others want. Keep it up.

[Helpless]

i agree!! f**k haters! if you try to please them all your life, you're life will be worthless! you keep strong in who you are! don't listen to them!

[Kayla :)]

i loved this poem. i can really relate to it

[Leave me alone....]

i agree with you. F**K the haters who make you feel like s**t! i mean WHO CARES of you don't like me! if you don't like someone then LEAVE THEM ALONE! plain and simple. Nice job!