Did it on my own

D-pryde had a did it on my own contest and i thought maybe i can just write something and maybe record my self later on . LOOOL. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxlQugs7XW4&feature=related

My inspiration brought me here,
standing tall,
feeling strong,
Yeah..
Things went wrong,
but when do things not?
There's always something coming
to make the right go wrong.
But here i am.
Standing tall,
feeling strong.
Don't need that Bullshit.
Don't need that love.
Songs.
Since age 4.
Protecting Mommy was my motivation.
What was missing?
Her cooperation.
There she went.
I'm all alone.
She'll come back.
Though..
Writing out my heart
That's what keeps me sane.
and here i am
telling the story
The one that kept me tame.
Or else i'll be wild.
Like everything else.
F*****g things up,
I gotta stay myself.
Can't say i did it on my own,
Cause' no one can do it by themselves.
But with the negativity,
F**k that, i'm grown.
But with all the help i got.
And everyone who i love.
If they helped me or hurt me,
I'm not gonna stop,
and if i have to do it on my own.
Don't expect me to drop.

I ain't falling no more.

Author's Note

Should i make a video of me doing this and enter his contest ?? I need some reviews on this cos i can't find the flow.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Ima make a video of mine, that I just wrote. We'll see how it goes. Though the quality wont be as good as this. The video not the rap. I hope.

[Matthew Kult]

I think it flowed well, it didnt chop for me, If you plan on doing this spoken word I suggest getting it down so you know your own breaks for breathes, but like i said as i went through it, flowed great. Very personal and relatable. Great write.

Regards,

Matthew

[TJ]

Yea definitely u should!