What more could i do?

What more can i do?
More could i break,
and try to fix.
The world was ripping
and i was taping.
what More could i have done?
More to turn to hate
and ruin everything we had made
all the walls being built back up
and all the gates closing and locked
and all the hard work finding the keys..
what more could i have lost?
When i had lost everything,
when i had lost nothing,
because i never had anything
but lies and broken walls.
What more can i do?
then watch the whole city burn down.
What more could i have done...

Reviews

[TJ]

omg wow! this is really really heartfelt and amazing! man the longing, the sadness the emotion! wow my favorite line "when i had lost nothing, because i never had anything" wow that says so much and those few words! this is definitely going to be a favorite! good job

[Kestrova]

A very interesting read, full of emotion and wonders that are truly thought-provoking. Another great poem!