I Beg of You

i love him..

there's a hint of truth to what you say,

though there's also mysteries to your words.

i can say, "I Love You," so easily,

but when i see you, my heart always screams it,

while all my lips can whisper is, "kiss me."

 

when you hold me in your arms,

i can finally say i belong somewhere.

 

while i lay in your arms,

i can wake up to you smiling,

to you brushing away my hair,

to you saying, "you're so pretty.."

 

every time i kiss your nose,

you grab my face gently and look into my eyes.

 

"if you're going to kiss me, kiss me right you jerk."

 

those words came from your lips,

the ones i'm so addicted to.

 

i can't help but smile every time you look over,

every time you pull me closer just to keep me warm.

when your hands are surrounding me,

and when you breathe onto my skin,

i become so alive..

 

"i like kissing you," you said,

"i like holding you," you whispered,

those words you say are filled with such kindness.

i love hearing them come from your voice.

 

your voice keeps me sane,

even though inside, i am broken.

i beg of you to keep by my side,

to stay in love with me..

and to hold me tight.

 

don't tell me you're not worth it.

don't say that you won't be faithful.

don't ask if i can love your friends more..

don't murmur that i will get hurt.

 

when it comes to you,

i can't love someone more than this.

 

when you cried in front of me,

when you whispered, "i'm no good for you,"

i wish i had held you in my arms,

i wish you would realize i actually love you.

 

if you don't want me to love you like this,

then i can't love anyone like that.

my heart skips a beat when i see your name,

my heart beats faster when i see your face.

no one other than you can do such a thing.

 

you may be right,

i might get hurt.

you might not be faithful,

but i can't help how my heart reacts.

 

when i walk away and you drag me back,

i may say that you're ridiculous,

but inside i love hearing you say,

"i missed you, just stay in my arms."

 

something like this happens once in a life time i heard,

but this has happened once before,

that time, the person i fell hard for,

left me and laughed in my face,

i was only their one night stand.

 

i don't want the same thing to happen again,

so sorry to make it seem like i worry too much,

i just don't want to see you walk away,

just as that person did long ago.

 

these words may seem like words you've heard before,

but if you could feel the way my heart moves,

the way it comes alive when you're around,

and the way it dies when you drive away,

then you'd understand how much these words mean to me.

 

i love you,

i sincerely do.

 

before you,

my heart seemed quite dead.

then you entered my life,

with that sly smirk of yours,

and my heart pounded alive against my will.

 

so i'm deeply sorry if i'm not the one you expected to be in love with you.

i'm truly sorry if i'm not good enough for your likings.

i don't know how to apologize for this strong Love i have for you.

 

all i can keep saying,

is I Love You

please, PLEASE, accept it..

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

sorry it got kinda long @.@ i just kind of really love this guy...he just doesn't understand how much..

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: This is beautiful and sweet and touching. I could sense your love and anguish over this guy. The poem flowed and told a story as it did. The length was fine, and the fact that it told a story made the length even easier to get used to. Heck, I didn't realize how long it was till I finished. To me, this poem was almost a letter.

Cons: None.

Overall: Beautiful outpouring of the heart. I liked it quite a lot. Isn't it a bit ironic that the ones we love the most deny their worth the most?

[TheRavenQueer]

I swear you're stalking me... o_O Or, at least, my boyfriend. Haha! This is brilliant!! Definitely a favourite. :) I love the emotion you put into it. Wow. Well done!

[Jesi]

I wanted to cry when i read this! My friend and i just love your poems. It means so much to us. especially since we both seem to be in love, but they're just realizing how much we love them. -Jesi


Your poem has soooo much meaning, you express yourself well in it. You are such a poetic person, love love love your creation! -Cookie :3


The Pros: We can tell it comes from your heart and your truely talented.
The Cons: your sorry for how long it is. there shouldn't be a limit of words to express how your love for someone is.

[*Evelen*]

This is so cute:] I love this. And don't be sorry it was great. Your love for him was felt through your words. Well done.