Victoria

Victoria

A Chapter by writingurl14

As soon as I get in my room I see Dave lying on the bed, holding a small black book.

“Your journal” he says holding it out for me. I take it and go to the far corner and sit down.

“Do you have a pensile?” I ask

“Yes” he hands me a pensile. “so put that down and come cuddle with me.”

EW! I think after all I love Patrick and this guy seems like an a*s hole

“I think I will write some first” I reply trying to be diplomatic. After all he controls my life in a way. “after though.” Maybe.

My journal entry went like this.

Dear Journal,

My name is Victoria, but I always prefer people to call me Vikki. But I guess none of that matter in the long run. After all I have been kidnapped, kind of. You see it’s not a typical kidnapping. They take care of you here. They also make you work. They took Patrick too. Patrick is my boyfriend. But the most exciting thing is I'm pregnant. He doesn't know yet. But Dave (my captor) let me take a test and it came out positive. I wish he was here now so I could tell him. The one drawback is that this may seem like a good place but it’s no place for a baby. Oh good Dave's asleep I'm going to bed goodnight.

The next morning when I woke up (I slept in the bathtub so that I didn’t have to sleep with Dave) I find Dave already gone and a note on my bed.

Vikki ill send Daniel to come take you to your job, please be ready by noon

~Dave

I glance at the clock, 20 till. Quickly I brush my teeth and comb my hair with the toothbrush, toothpaste, and hairbrush Dave got me. (He may be an a*****e but at least he takes care of me.) At 10 till, a man comes in. “Hi my name’s Daniel, here’s your breakfast.”

“Thanks” I say

“I will come every day at noon as soon as you finish eating then we shall get to work. At 8pm you come back to this room.” He looks at me, his eyes pierce my soul. He has black hair, is about 6’4 and has ocean blue eyes.  I try and fail to look somewhere other than his beautiful eyes and suddenly the urge to kiss him was overwhelming.

Quickly I stand up. “I'm done” I say

“Ok,” he also stands up “follow me”

I follow him down multiple corridors and finally stops in front of a door marked laundry.

Once I'm inside he follows me closing the door and sits down on the top of the dryer and motions for me to get started.  Today was mostly sheets since I did clothing yesterday.

“From now on you will also iron.” He says “but someone else will deliver”

“Alright, guess I don’t have a choice”

“What would you prefer?”

“It seems the most efficient thing would be one person wash and dry and one person iron and deliver.”

“You have a good point but the way I set it up you see Patrick when you give him your cloths to deliver”

“Really?”

“Yes.”

“Oh my god! Thank you so much!”

“Your welcome Dave told me about how much you care about him and about the test and asked if I could arrange a brief meeting. He really isn’t that bad of a guy all he has done is help you since you got here.”

“True, did he tell you he is trying to hook up with me?”

“Yes”

“Well I better get back to work”

At that moment a man busts down the door and holds a gun to my head

“Don’t move or I shoot” yells

Daniel takes no heed, “you wouldn’t shoot her she is the only thing keeping you alive”

“Daniel please don’t piss off the guy holding a gun to my head”

“Sorry but we both know it’s true”

“Shut up!” he yells again. Again with all the yelling! Why can’t everyone stay calm?

“Alright cupcake you’re going to come with me slowly put your hands up and walk out the door”

 



© 2012 writingurl14


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