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A Poem by writingurl14

The gift of writing is just as I said
A gift
Some have it
some are missing out
The gift of writing comes with responsibility
it becomes your job to write others stories
to tell their tales
writing will follow you everywhere
like a good dog it will always be there

© 2013 writingurl14


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And you write very well my friend.....I've written a piece called "The Words Choose You".....you're right it is a gift......Well penned......Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


writingurl14

12 Years Ago

thank you....
1). ..."The gift of writing comes with responcibility..." I believe you meant 'responsibility?'
2)...."to tell their tails..."
TAILS
adjective, adverb
1.(of a coin) with the reverse facing up: On the next toss, the coin came up tails.
( as here, I think you meant 'TALES'...
TALES
noun
1.a narrative that relates the details of some real or imaginary event, incident, or case; story: a tale about Lincoln's dog.
2.a literary composition having the form of such a narrative.
3.a falsehood; lie.
4.a rumor or piece of gossip, often malicious or untrue.
5.the full number or amount.
( I know, Ye' Auld "TALES" of Scotland, and all that. that was on purpose...)
I tell you these things not to be overly critical, but because, with a few minute changes, this could really make the point! Great job otherwise...

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are blessed with gift of writing.
"writing will follow you everywhere
like a good dog it will always be there"

Posted 12 Years Ago


writingurl14

12 Years Ago

thanks
zainul

12 Years Ago

You are welcome
writing does follow me everywhere, and not just some are missing out, alot of the people are. This is so true

Posted 12 Years Ago


You are right.but you can learn how to write,like the footballers some werent born with the talent but they learned or what do you Think?.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wolf

12 Years Ago

You're right, but hard work can never be compared to talent...
Because hard work may not alwa.. read more
Emrick

12 Years Ago

I think working hard should be the talent and talent should be the result of working hard.if i was t.. read more
A very reverent poem on thee gift of writing. It really is just that - a gift. As someone who almost always uses couplets, it's fairly refreshing to read this. Other than a couple spelling errors here and there, I really enjoyed it! Two thumbs up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem reminded me of Spiderman, the part that Uncle Ben told Peter that 'Great power comes with Great responsibility'.
Another thing...it's 'tales', not 'tails' :)

I like it!
Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

writingurl14

12 Years Ago

i finally watched spiderman for the first time and i finally know what you are makeing a reference t.. read more

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