The gift of writing is just as I said A gift Some have it some are missing out The gift of writing comes with responsibility it becomes your job to write others stories to tell their tales writing will follow you everywhere like a good dog it will always be there
1). ..."The gift of writing comes with responcibility..." I believe you meant 'responsibility?'
2)...."to tell their tails..."
TAILS
adjective, adverb
1.(of a coin) with the reverse facing up: On the next toss, the coin came up tails.
( as here, I think you meant 'TALES'...
TALES
noun
1.a narrative that relates the details of some real or imaginary event, incident, or case; story: a tale about Lincoln's dog.
2.a literary composition having the form of such a narrative.
3.a falsehood; lie.
4.a rumor or piece of gossip, often malicious or untrue.
5.the full number or amount.
( I know, Ye' Auld "TALES" of Scotland, and all that. that was on purpose...)
I tell you these things not to be overly critical, but because, with a few minute changes, this could really make the point! Great job otherwise...
You are right.but you can learn how to write,like the footballers some werent born with the talent but they learned or what do you Think?.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
You're right, but hard work can never be compared to talent...
Because hard work may not alwa.. read moreYou're right, but hard work can never be compared to talent...
Because hard work may not always overcome talent in some ways :)
12 Years Ago
I think working hard should be the talent and talent should be the result of working hard.if i was t.. read moreI think working hard should be the talent and talent should be the result of working hard.if i was to change words meaning id hv done that.for real,hard work always overcomes talents. working hard makes one get better but talent has its limit which one cant cross.
A very reverent poem on thee gift of writing. It really is just that - a gift. As someone who almost always uses couplets, it's fairly refreshing to read this. Other than a couple spelling errors here and there, I really enjoyed it! Two thumbs up.
This poem reminded me of Spiderman, the part that Uncle Ben told Peter that 'Great power comes with Great responsibility'.
Another thing...it's 'tales', not 'tails' :)
I like it!
Keep up the good work! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
i finally watched spiderman for the first time and i finally know what you are makeing a reference t.. read morei finally watched spiderman for the first time and i finally know what you are makeing a reference too and i completly aggree :)
thanks for the spelling tips
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