Wait

wait,

Please don't go

please don't leave me alone

wait,

Im sorry that I left

I'm sorry that I said

everything I said

wait

if you go

Ill be here

waiting

Reviews

[judith106]

I really like this. The repetition of the word Wait comes across very powerful

[Alex Vidmar]

beautiful

[Neon]

Sad!
I hate watching angels in pain. Anyway, This write's filled with your feelings, pain and love of someone.
I hope he comes back again in your life to keep you happy, make you smile once again and taking ya away from the pain.

May God Bless You!

[Sara S.]

"Ill be here waiting"
Gosh, people die to say those words to people.
Love this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Most of us been to these places. Begging for forgiveness. I learn the hard way. Forgiveness is rarely given. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Michael Stevens]

Powerful, straight-ahead poem!

[A.T.]

beautiful :D I loved the repetition. It creates more depth in the few words spoken.

[Raymond Federle]

Very nice. You can feel the emotion in those few words. Well done! :) :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes we realize we made a mistake way to late.Then we can only hope that those we love will give us a second chance and know we will be here waiting when thay are ready to forgive us.Very nice poem:)