What would you do

When self contorl wiens

And anger sets in

I cry to make the moment

That much sweeter

 

I let myself feel again

Anger pain and hurt

Thats what I crave

Because those feelings

Are my only friends

 

As soon as its done

I feel better

But its only temporary

hate guilt and remorse

thats what i feel

 

what would you do

if you were me

would you take the

few moments of bliss

for the weeks of suffering.

Reviews

[N.A.]

I really like the last verse.

[Sami Khalil]

When self contorl wiens (control wanes)

And anger sets in

I cry to make the moment

That much sweeter.


A splendid read and write...Bravo..................

[DogDrawler]

I great feel for questions. Pawsome poem. :)

[A.T.]

The ending hit hard. Beautiful :D

[writingurl14]

thank you for your review :)

[zainul]

You can handle your pain in a sweet way.
Great write.

[writingurl14]

Thank you :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,sweet poet.:)

[sivan]

i'd take the bliss... in this life we need to grab every moment of bliss we possibly can

[RainDancer1997]

Different people have different thoughts on it. Though, I believe that people need to follow their heart and then decide. Pain comes with pretty much anything we do. Good poem:)

[Michael Stevens]

Believe me; I'm an expert on guilt; excellent poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old wise saying. "Better have loved and lost. Than to wish you did." I believe we must make the decision of the heart. If we feel there is possibilities. It can be worth the effort? A very good poem. Open the door to a long conversation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote