From John

If my life was a book

You’d be the best chapter

The best part of all

My happily ever after

In love with you I fall

Every time I think of you

Everything you are and everything you do

Your everything I want, everything I need

I’ll take on anything

To make it forever for you and me

Your smile brings my smile

When you’re with me everyday

And when you’re not

You’re still with me in my thoughts

You have me smiling all the time

Even in my sleep

Because when I close my eyes

You’re there in all my dreams

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the way you led the reader into hopeful and positive thoughts. I like the flow of thoughts and the good ending. Real love make us have reason and purpose for life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[writingurl14]

Both me and the author of this poem (my boyfriend) are glad that you like it! i personally think this poem is sweet!

[Brett Pritchard]

A touching and honest piece. Gently capturing that beautiful unsullied innocence and promise present only at the beginnings of a new relationship. The spring season in the tumultuous cycle that is love. I liked it very much. Well done. 😉

[Brett Pritchard]

A nice touching little piece there, neatly capturing and encapsulating that freshness and promise we get at the beginnings of a relationship. The spring season of the tumultuous cycle that is love. I liked it very much, well done. 😉

[Douglas White]

Send this to Hallmark. Seriously. I think they'd buy this, as-is.

[writingurl14]

ya really think?

[Douglas White]

Go read some Hallmark sentimental cards. This is just as good, if not better. Check around, but I doubt anyone here will disagree.

[Phillitup]

"Even in my sleep

Because when I close my eyes

You’re there in all my dreams"

Love that! It's perfectly described and I absolutely think the poems rhythm is perfect! :)

-Dell

[Michael Stevens]

The object of this fine poem is one lucky person!

[writingurl14]

Thanks.... :)

[sivan]

this is a truely sweet poem. to love like that is beautiful

[writingurl14]

Thank you... this review means a lot to John and me

[DogDrawler]

A very romantic poem that really brings back truth and memories. I loved it! :) Pawsome poem!

[writingurl14]

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it!

[Tom]

A delightful love poem!

With an easy flow, a pleasing rhyming pattern and conveying a sincere, romantic message, this is a splendid write for sure !

[writingurl14]

Thank you... My boyfriend wrote this for me and I had to post it! it made me cry when i read it for the first time! I wanted to see others reactions to it.

[Tom]

That's sweet !