Last Survivor v4

A Book by b!tchgirl1618

A killer is lose in El CASA LOCA, can anyone survive? 5 friends are trapped in a mental hospital called El CASA LOCA. When a killer comes trying to get revenge… well lets just say things might not end

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Julie Spade

The story is original and compelling to read in my opinion. The way you describe things and they way it is written makes the concept much more interesting and solid. Though at times I may get confessed by the way it is settled up but don't worry everyone has room for improvement ! Keep Writing .

Posted 10 Years Ago

Fernando Dardón

I liked your idea, building up the plot of the story by writing diary entrys. This makes your book interesting, but also, you must be careful. Remember that is not the same the way a person thinks and the way he actualy narrates the story. I got a little lost when reading, then I understood ir was all abouta diary, very clever actually. This migh be, and I strongly recommend you to do it, a way to hook up the reader (which actually happened to me), cause these firsts chapters lack of details, but hey! That doesnt necesarily needs todo be bad. What you need is a way todo clear those little holes as the plot of the story goes on.
The thing is, there was something that kept me reading, that made me wonder what was going todo happen next. This is the advantage flor you.
Not everything is written yet, i hope to keep reading exiting chapters in the future.
Resuming, nice writing, I liked it a lot! :D

Fernando