What would you do

When self contorl wanes

 And anger sets in

 I cry to make the moment

 That much sweeter

 

 

 I let myself feel again

 Anger pain and hurt

 Thats what I crave

 Because those feelings

 Are my only friends

 

 

 As soon as its done

 I feel better

 But its only temporary

 hate guilt and remorse

 thats what i feel

 

 what would you do

 if you were me

 would you take the

 few moments of bliss

 for the weeks of suffering.

 

 

 

Reviews

[justright]

grow stronger every day. Be what you can only in your wildest dreams imagine you can be. Then when you are there, have wilder dreams. It's your world. The cuts you make show your control. Dream bigger. There is nothing that is not possible, but possible does not mean easy.

[Tennessee]

Not bad kid, a what the f**k would you do in my situation feel. Sick.

[b!tchgirl1618]

thank you... :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very relevant write...Thank you for sharing your pen...:)....................

[fireblossom]

I feel this piece from my own experience. The fact that you get to the point with few words making every word count makes your poem strong. Keep up the good work.

I need to try some of your stories.

j

[CoraZanini]

strong and good job.remember that both pain and hapiness always come to an end:)!

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