As It Flows

As it flows so thick and red,

the sharpened blade beside my bed.

I start to think and all I see

are images of you and me.

I wish you were here by my side

just so I didn't have to hide

in the darkness of my room

all I can think of is my doom.

Thinking back on what you said

thoughts are churning in my head,

and all I want to do is know

if you'll still love me when you go.

Reviews

[koty bell]

This was awesome... Impressive sir...

[YouoweYoupay]

This has the flow of a song. Words are small and brief but connected to human memories and emotions. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

-youoweyoupay

[Jane Doe]

Nice....
I kinda feel like giving up somtetimes to but then I think of my family including you
All my 'siblings' online it doesn't ur my family too. So I don't and keep pushing on through p.s WWEERREE ON AT THE SAME TIME

[Jocelin]

cooooooooolll poem! Lol send me a message I have a question for you.... :)
P.S. it's sad.... :/

[Ina]

:) very great poem my friend, kudos :D

[watch_the_world]

Good work. Really. But maybe it's best if u let go of her. I'm sorry hun

[KaySea]

impressive. keep up the great work

[Calypso]

This was sad. Been there, done that.

[Ruth]

To think things to such depth is to hurt sometimes, this is beautifully done love xx