The-good-old-days

Pinwheels spin front the rusty window frames,

Funny notes made by the swaying wind chime.

Flute flutter through the supine clouds,

Mixed in that are mother's serene lullabies.

Author's Note

I'm not good at using words (and grammar). Any more favorable ideas please?

Reviews

[M]

good idea but needs more working :)

[Azurel]

I know. My vocabularies are quite bad :)