My Twin

My Twin

A Poem by Azurel

Never says I'm beautiful,
Never shares me any candy,
Never leaves me alone when I fall asleep,
Teases me all the time.

But...

Never says 'I'm busy' in my time of need,
Never leaves me when I'm dull,
Never gets tired when I ramble,
Always appeases me when I cry,
And says 'It'll be just fine!'.
Yeah, it'll be just fine,
'Cause you're here...

© 2013 Azurel


Author's Note

Azurel
That's just a flowery poem. In fact, when I fall down, the first thing she does is laughing out loud. When I get trouble, she hits on my shoulders and shouts: 'BAKA!!!' (Japanese - means idiot) before sitting down and listening to me. And so on =A=

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BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BAKA! BAKA! BAKA! BAKA! BAKA! BAKA! BAKA! BLEURGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Cough* *Cough* BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I do share candy with you! I think..... actually I don't remember.....?!

Solilokiss and Chaos_Collector, THIS is my reaction, but thanks for reviewing her poem :) AND YOU BAKA TWIN, this is my message: BAKA BAKA BAKA BAKA

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

My understanding is if I met her, I'd be getting beat up a lot. You make her sound pretty brutal
Azurel

11 Years Ago

It's up to your behaviour. Just give her Swiss chocolate and Jafar Cakes and you'll be one of her be.. read more
Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

Haha okay, I'll have to keep that in mind :)
They're there, and that consistency of love and security is a bond never broken. You are fortunate and I just love how you expressed although our twins have good and bad traits, they're all good because they are who they are - loved and loving. Well done, Azurel. This is great and inspiring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Solilokiss

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome :) I find it's the pennings that burst forth without too much thought that are .. read more
Azurel

11 Years Ago

Ha ha... All I will receive is a great punch from my twin for having described her like that. OMG wh.. read more
Azurel

11 Years Ago

Told ya! Luckily she is farrrrrr away from me xD That's why she cannot hit me *Yay*
Your twin overall sounds like a good person. This was something certainly different from my normal read. I enjoyed it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

Lol Azurel, your twin sounds pretty upset right now xD
Azurel

11 Years Ago

She'll forget soon, if no one reminds her *muttering*
Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

Oh then you'll be fiiine. . . maybe

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Added on December 21, 2013
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Azurel
Azurel

Tomoe Gakuen, Vietnam, Vietnam



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