What does He see in You?

What does he see in you?
He used to be in love with me
before he met you.
How could that be?
Is it because of all things you do?
we used to be together all the time,
everything seemed so fine,
but then you suddenly appeared,
and his love for me slowly disappeared.
This love was supposed to last,
until that spell you had to cast.
He became so different and distant,
his love for you was instant.
I tried so hard to satisfy him,
but the light of our love was too dim.
What does he see in you?
Is it because of your height?
Your beautiful brown wavy hair?
Your big round eyes?
Your light honey colored skin?
That perfect body you have?
You dont have pronounced scars like me.
Is it your innocent and flirty attitude?
Or that you are intelligent?
I envy you.
You took him away from me.
and i am still in love with him.
i just cannot bare seeing both of you together.
What does he see in you?

Reviews

[Julio Cesar Ruiz]

you know, ruth, you amaze me sometimes. I find it hard to believe that the nice, goofy, cute girl that goes to class with me wrote this. its intense and deep. you can feel the emotion radiating and its something that we all can relate. But I wonder if theres some truth to this and if its true if its about someone I know.

[XxBurnXdownXtheXdiscoxX]

I really like this poem. You can sense the emotion in it. Good job! ^_^

[Inactive]

It's a horrible thing to see someone you love slowly slipping away from you.
You communicate this idea very well in this poem. Great work.


- Neo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OUCH!!.. it is difficult when the one we loves leaves for another and you try to figure out what happened... great write and venting of feelings.

[DuCeZ]

OMG!!!
this is such a amazing write..i love it..u captured the whole feeling and how it hurt n makes u mad.
it waz juss so amazing!
Great job!

[E-man]

OMFG Mrs. I LOVE it this was such a great write does it have truth to it? who's it about is this the "chisme"
anyway i Loved the whole thing.. You have to give this one to Standen this is better than anything I've written but then again my writting sux.. well excelent write mrs

[Voice]

You took the words of what I'm going through right out of my mouth...amazing write and something I can relate to...thank you for saying this...because i couldnt.

Voice

[Madelin]

really do love. one reason is because i can relate, and the other because you emotion was really shown threw this poem. i loved how it had randum rhyming parts
this was my favorite part
"What does he see in you?
Is it because of your height?
Your beautiful brown wavy hair?
Your big round eyes?
Your light honey colored skin?
That perfect body you have?
You dont have pronounced scars like me.
Is it your innocent and flirty attitude?
Or that you are intelligent?"