somebody help me

somebody help me,
please, save me
save me from my pain.
this pain that wont let me breath,
it stings,
it breaks my skin,
it leaves it scars on it,
it reflects my pain.
somebody,
help me,
make all the bleeding stop,
all the bruises in my soul,
all the tears of my body,
please, save me.
from the haunting visions i see,
from the sudden whispers,
from the harsh wind
that burns,
somebody help me

 

Reviews

[Voice]

Very deep I can really feel the emotion in this write. The inner cry for help is something I know all too well and you portray it very well in this piece. Amazing write...

Voice

[E-man]

simple words yet so powerful good job mrs