TONIGHT GOD

I write a prayer to remind myself why I care

I kneel down again because I wanna be with you

Im sorry for tonight

Im sorry for another fight

Im sorry I had to learn this way

By hurting you and making you feel astray

 

I need you

More than anything else I admit I really do

When the day ends, I close my eyes and turn to you

Because the truth is that it's the only thing I could really do

I need you

 

I pray to you

Sometimes I ask myself why I do

A lot of times I doubt these words

But it’s the strongest hope I ever learned

I pray to you

 

I love you

Author's Note

Do you guys think this is good for a song??? :)

Reviews

[NeonWolves]

Beautiful. I can relate and I can just feel the emotion.

[azeilc]

wow thanks :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sincere and beautiful~

[Searching 4 Serenity]

I could tell; your heart really went into this.

[azeilc]

okay, I'll stick to that ;) I was a bit upset writing this with things around me. I would have wanted to put some melody but I'm a bit busy these days so I;ll stick with writing more instead ;)

[Searching 4 Serenity]

Perhaps for a short hymn. An actual song song? Probably not. It would be EXCELLENT for an opening/closing hymn. Keep this as your personal prayer. That's my best advice.