Broken you

Talk,

Listen,

Learn,

Don't show them you don't want too.

 

Run,

Jump,

Dance,

Don't let them know your too tired.

 

Heart beats,

Red blood bleads,

Breathing,

Don't let them know you wish you couldn't.

 

Smile,

Laugh,

Dream,

Don't let them see the broken you.

Reviews

[Eddy Jones]

A true gem and I now look forward to so many more to come.
Eddy.

[Nix]

Great poem. I like the experimental scheme. It's good to see people trying new things instead of just sticking to the traditional ways. Great job!