Ayla

Ayla

A Poem by John Jackson (El Juero)
"

love grows...

"
I am moth...
You are light...
Drawn to you...
Feel that heat...
Love the burn...

© 2012 John Jackson (El Juero)


Author's Note

John Jackson (El Juero)
fifteen words say it all

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This is beautiful. The words are very sweet and wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The allure of the light is too much for me, and I've got the burns to prove it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love this...15 words do say it all and more, indeed.
So much can actually be said with so few words..Lovely piece

Posted 12 Years Ago



My Dear Writing Friend John,
A beautiful expression of your all’s love, well written!

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 12 Years Ago


I love that burn tooo.............ahhh!

Posted 12 Years Ago


And that is is what LOVE means .. beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great name for a song and poem as well 15 little worss never looked so good

Posted 12 Years Ago


so sweet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Fifteen words do indeeed say it all.A moth and a flame are love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


aw this is nice. i wonder why they do that...there are some fantastic species of moths, as beautiful as any butterfly. Thanks John.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 23, 2012
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John Jackson (El Juero)
John Jackson (El Juero)

Anchorage, AK



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