it don't work that way.

it don't work that way.

A Poem by John Jackson (El Juero)
"

sometimes art does not imitate life.

"
When my friend died
last summer,
his eyes were open, 
gazing at the ceiling.
Looking for heaven,
I suppose.
Awakened by the
departing spirit,
the notion to close 
his eyes,
like in the movies,
overpowered me.
Gently placing a thumb 
and middle finger 
on his eyelids,
I attempted 
to close his eyes,
but they 
would not shut.
Only remain open,
until his body was 
no more.

© 2011 John Jackson (El Juero)


Author's Note

John Jackson (El Juero)
I have absolutely no idea why i wrote and posted this.

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hmm..I will keep two silver dollars in my pockets...just in case.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was a good thing you did, if only in your thoughts and deeds. The poem is beautiful for is simple and honest expression of love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BECAUSE IT WAS A MEMORY OF A FRIEND THAT TOUCHED YOU .. AND LEFT YOU PONDERING THE SECRETS OF LIFE, AND DEATH .. ..

THIS OLD NURSE HAS BEEN THERE, MORE THAN ONCE ...

I LIKE YOUR REAL THOUGHTS ... J.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

insightful, how the living are always curious of the afterlife - the sense of our spirit departs and lives on -

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have an idea, some memories won't be silenced.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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John Jackson (El Juero)
John Jackson (El Juero)

Anchorage, AK



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