REM

Musing on the act of dreaming

disjointed vignettes

in early morning slumber

the passionate nothingness

so nonsensical and disturbed

colors the coming day

within a subliminal world 

of no dark, and no light

just every shade of gray

Author's Note

The film usually stops when i open my eyes. Thank you for your time.

Reviews

[Robin]

the poetry of the poetry of dreams

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Gonna be a grand year, my Friend!

[Rene Velez]

Awesome, we actually live in two worlds.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Gracias! Prospero Ano Nuevo!

[SkinlessFrank]

we do inhabit this half awake-half asleep world for so much of our time here....wonderful poem

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

You are handsome as ever, Frank. Happy New Year!

[Muse]

Gotta love Homer...he needs a sign around his neck...beware....don't disturb the daydreamer. lol cute poem

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Thank you, Dear Muse.

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~ beautifully written, monsieur john... a perfect piece of poetry that describes a gray world skillfully and sensitively... it's great to read you again... welcome back...

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Happy 2013. Going to try to show up more often this year. Thanks for reviewing.

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~ the privilege is all mine, monsieur john... happy 2013 to you too... and i do look forward to more new pieces by you... :)