the wind dancer

the wind dancer

A Story by AyeSarah

she dances as the fire burns, she stomps her feet against the earth to the beat of the drums,

she sings while the moon shines down on her skin and she hears the wolves as they howl from

within. She listens to the wind on her back and she feels the cool moistness on her back. The wolves are her brothers, the fox her sister.., the bear her mother.., and the eagle her father.

 

This is her world.

 

This is where she shines.

© 2012 AyeSarah


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What a lovely description :) The only constructive criticism that I can offer: when you say "she listens to the wind on her back and she feels the cool moistness on her back", I don't know why but it feels repetitive to say back twice (maybe I'm just nitpicking though). Other than that, though, this was very well written and had lovely imagery.
Keep up the good work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 13, 2012
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AyeSarah
AyeSarah

Thomaston, CT



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S A R A H M A R i E _* twenty one years young. Mother of one | Ayden Michael Stern December 9th 2011 ♥ From Connecticut. my writing is a mix of my dreams, thoughts, and a few tales of my .. more..

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