The unknown.

It would be easier to write about heartbreak.
About how you've ruined me.
Lines that describe how broken I am, and how I'll never learn.
It would be effortless to write it all again.
- A second nature to feel it.
I can describe being crushed and physically feeling every break.
But, tonight I am stuck..
- As I felt a little flutter from the mention of your name.

I am at a loss for words, for once.
Floating so freely in a danger zone.
How do I write about not being hurt?
How do I describe the way you look into my eyes for so long, and smile?
What's that feeling when he holds my hand and kisses it, without realising?

So, I write about aliens,

And finally being found in this strange place.

Author's Note

Hmmm...

Reviews

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

you write from a place that I no longer visit and I am happy not to visit.....I am an alien too and to land on a planet of love is strange to me. I do I react to it? I don't I just stay numb and keep my distance.


I am at a loss for words, for once.
Floating so freely in a danger zone.
How do I write about not being hurt? Not sure cause I know is pain

How do I describe the way you look into my eyes for so long, and smile?
What's that feeling when he holds my hand and kisses it, without realising?

[Jennesis]

Oh yes, hard to describe the good feelings, they are fluttering and hard to catch in your net. Beautiful.

[DoormanDan]

I agree with Lizardo, the title does fit the poem perfectly. This piece asks a lot of questions that im sure many have asked, and the last two lines are great to end the poem with. Awesome work! :)

[Lizardo]

Wow, the name does go with the poem
But it is really good, again your writing makes me think in a perspective of love and another perspective of thought.
Nice work