What Good Would Say To Bad..

The conversation between the 'good guy' and the 'bad', If ever they were to meet.

"How could you do that to someone?

How could you do that to her?

Look at her!?

She is so fragile.

All because of you! You made her this way!

How could you hurt someone so kind,

Someone so small and so beautiful?

-Man! she is so beautiful!!"

"I, I Know..."

"No! You are the fool.

All she ever wanted was to love you.

And she waited for your love in return,

No matter what you threw at her!

She is a shadow of herself.

Because you walked away with something of hers.

You walked away with her heart.

And now...

It will always belong to you. 

And the rest of us, who see her

-Who really see her,

......Will forever live in your shadow."

Reviews

[Arsh]

Both're right on their own sides even.. this's all what makes a diff. between a 'good' and the 'bad' one. Both wants love, both needs to beloved, but only the one from two appreciates the value of love. And, it depends ... who appreciates it. After all, a good's bad, & a bad's good as well. The love's not found easily... nor the goodness of someone. Very strong poetry you pen on. Your work makes me looking forward to reading some more of yous. Wonderful work!

[ayejodie]

Thank you. I love what you said there, both good and bad need to be loved but only one knows how to appreciate it. Always good to hear such kind reviews and most importantly that people have enjoyed them. Thanks again for your feedback :)

[Rea Sky]

oooh. I like this poem! it's like a tale well spokem
nice delivery of story using poetry!

[ayejodie]

Thank you! Thought id try something different :) glad you liked it!

[TheLostMind]

A really good write.. quite meaningful. The usage of "italics" adds more emotion to - "Who really see her". Some things are hard to forget and love is one such thing.. Some people leave us but their memories linger.. Sad, but true..

[ayejodie]

Thank you so much for your feedback! :)

[Cool Girl]

This is very meaningful! I love this!

[ayejodie]

Thank you! Im glad you enjoyed it :)

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome!

[Lizardo]

An interesting piece of work and I must say, Kind of deep
I love the dialogues and the poem is really, probably sad because is someone telling the other
The bad that he did to a girl.
anyways, Wonderful poem

[ayejodie]

Thank you! :)