who are you?

 I felt pretty good about what I was doing. But then a voice asked “who are you? Why did you break in our house?’

I am a poor little girl who lived in the drains for half of her life with no parents, yeah, is that what I was supposed to answer to that cute, young, and innocent face. I just put on an angry expression, robbed the rest of the expensive things and got out. I sat in a place far away from that house. as I started counting my loot, I stopped and thank once again about what the little girl said” who am I?” “am I just an unlucky girl trying to find her way out by stealing” why am I even asking myself it’s the truth I didn’t have an opportunity in learning, I didn’t even have any friends. I felt so alone in this world and I had to make a life for me. I was hopeless.

On the next morning I woke up to a huge, bright, white light I thought I was taken, but no I was not anymore on earth I was somewhere new. I started turning in circles trying to anticipate which way to go, but all I saw was white light. Out of nowhere a gush of wind went by my face; I looked up and saw this beautiful guy who had dark blonde hair, crystal clear eyes that were blue and he was just beyond perfect. I looked to the ground and saw that his feet didn’t even touch the ground. “oh my god, how could you fly like that?!” then he said with a calm and serene voice trying not to scare me “ don’t worry I won’t hurt I am with you now for a reason you have done wrong deeds that you, my dear are supposed to fix!’

I tried denying” what did I do wrong…?”

“Please call me angel”

“Ok? Angel I’m sorry about that but I don’t think you actually exist, you are just an illusion in my dreams, now since this is my dreams, I command you, with no hard feelings, to flee out of my head please and let me go back to my nice, long nap”

“Well Cilia I’m afraid to tell you, that you are actually dead. I am with you to put you back to life, to erase your wrong doings, and to help you to find out the answer to your question.”

“What question?”

“Who are you?” a moment of silence went by I was shocked then I said “I don’t know”

Author's Note

its not yet complete so tell me if you like it if so i may continue it thx :)

Reviews

[Zoe Marie Ross]

Hi, Welcome to Writers Cafe. I like this beginning of a potentially great fast paced story. One suggestion regarding the word "thank", I would personally change the word to "thought". Hope that this helps and look forward to reading sone more, once it has been written. I don't mind you sending me a read request once the next section is completed.

[aya_lambert]

thanx i will surely take a notee of that ;)