Elements

Freestyle poetry with visual of text.

I am the freedom of wind,
The breath that comforts,
The wild dance of fury.
I am the song of nature,
The breath that breathes life,
The unstoppable fury of force.
I am the passion of fire,
The breath that ignites,
The destructive & creative force.
I am the flowing of waves,
The breath of tears,
The tides of the life force.
I am the union of akasha,
The breath of everything,
The lines of a connected force.

I am life.
I am free.
I am unstoppable.
I am passionate.
I am emotions.
Here I am.

Reviews

[GetTheHellOut]

Great Work. Really nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep going.

[FoolsGold23]

"wild dance of fury" and "Breath of tears" are two metaphors that made me stop and think! this is a penetrating poem, describing indescribable things with alacrity, well done on this piece!

[Khance]

I liked how you change the font of the different words to truly individualise the emotions and elements. Nicely worded and very nicely conveyed. Thanks for posting it.

(Ps - Off topic, but your artwork is very very nice)

[Celestine Astraea Fires..]

You have described the elements in perfect clarity in this piece. Absolutely beautiful writing.

[C K.]

"I am life.
I am free.
I am unstoppable.
I am passionate.
I am emotions.
Here I am."
That's just really really brilliant and wonderful. I like how bold it is, but at the same time soft and graceful.
Awesome stuff CKx