Reserved

Stab that dagger across my heart
I want to feel the pain, inch by inch
slowly slashing my rib cage, across my lungs
and into my gloomy heart.

Tell me you need me
Tell me you like me too
How can I be happy?
when  I'm the only one,
whose falling deeply in love with you.

Yes, I'm the weirdest of all weird
Call me fool or dumb will do
I'm just here silently admiring you.

Reviews

[Broken.buddy]

Ah, Unrequited Love. Please submit this piece to the contest which I have created at : http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Unrequited-Love/50236/

I have learnt that 'do' and 'you' can be rhyming with each other and can be used to mean something. Thank you for that lesson.

[Matching Socks]

That last stanza hit me. I would live to take the high and mighty road here and say 'no' don't let anyone make you feel this way but it's just the truth of it sometimes.

Love makes even smart people dumb.

Enjoyed your poem for the truth it speaks. :)

[Sam Po]

I'm happy you liked it :) and thanks for appreciating my poem.