Alice

She cried so many times

in her life.

She gave up on love

when everything died.

But then she got back 

on her feet.

Decided to fight the war

that had won many times

before.

She cried.

She bled.

But it all worked

out.

She is a fighter.

She is loud.

She is beautiful.

You may call her

insane.

You may think she

is a murderer.

But to me, she is one

of the strongest women

in the world.

Thank you, Alice.

Author's Note

Jesus, this is the cheesiest thing ever...
But fuck it, I wanna be cheesy!
I love you, Alice!!

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I don't know her, but it's clear that this comes from the heart and you put a lot of love into it...who cares if it's cheesy? I think it's touching.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Alice is a good person and this kind of honor is evidence of that.
Beautiful...just beautiful.

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

i like it. it kinda of shows u know alot of wat people go through everyday. i love how i could actually sorta feel wat she was going through, just because i could relate

[♫Your♪Rainb..]

this is very sweet ^^ and good write ^^

[lovepoet]

"She cried.

She bled.

But it all worked
out."

I'm glad at least, that it all worked out.

Tortured, twisted and kind of nice.

A lovely write!

[Erinne S.]

Even though you think this is cheesy I think it is honest and inspirational. Great job!

~Erinne

[Helpless]

very heartfelt and honest

[Chris]

Sometimes it pays off to be cheesy and it certainly did here :)

A sweet ode to a friend. Wonderful

[Tasha]

I love this! You did a good job, Alice is lucky to have you as a friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for a positive poem. Need to look for the good in other people. Life is hard for the most of us. We need good friends and positive things in a life to keep us on the right road. The poem was strong and I like kind and good feel of the words. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote