Alice

She cried so many times

in her life.

She gave up on love

when everything died.

But then she got back 

on her feet.

Decided to fight the war

that had won many times

before.

She cried.

She bled.

But it all worked

out.

She is a fighter.

She is loud.

She is beautiful.

You may call her

insane.

You may think she

is a murderer.

But to me, she is one

of the strongest women

in the world.

Thank you, Alice.

Author's Note

Jesus, this is the cheesiest thing ever...
But fuck it, I wanna be cheesy!
I love you, Alice!!

Reviews

[Jake Staffeld]

Alice... I remember her. I agree with your poem, even if you think it's cheesy. Not everyone can understand any of this, I can certaintly understand part of it though. Not every write needs to be a masterpiece, it's about getting the point across. And this certaintly does.

[Patches I'm not so new..]

good write the power of this persona comes through

[MAC]

i think it is great...don't know what makes cheesy....it is how you feel and you leave your true heart in your words.

[amdc101]

Alice sounds great. I think you did an awesome job. :)

[trainwreck]

Ah... Alice. Love her. This was great. I loved it.

[light and ashes]

I think that this is really sweet :] you did a great job with it.

[compositionc]

Alice sounds epic.

[halflives]

Wowza! Well done!

[Ashli The Amazing]

alice....sounds like a wonderful person you really care about. i like it [:

[Harmony Dark]

Smerhgen dufferrr!@!!!! thiaaaas is GRATTEEE alice sunds likk a nivker gorll