Living Plastic

  Let me go inside

  your mind for just

  a second, little

  girl.

  I want to see how you

  are and how you

  live in this absurd

  world.

  I would like to swim

  around in a puddle of

  your thoughts.

  And understand why its

  so sweet when you kill

  them all.

  What are you doing?

  How are you living?

  Keep playing pretend.

  Try on dresses, put

 on a new face

  act different every day.

  Keep living plastic.

  Always be the innocent

  one.

  Never let them see how

  you are or they might

  hate you too. 

Author's Note

This is the first poem I have written in a while due to writer's block. Sorry it isn't that good.
(I will find a picture soon by the way)
Thank you for any reviews :)

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

wow. It just feels as if we are watching you read her mind. The absence of hidden feelings and thoughts was just great.

[SheWhoWillNotBeNamed]

Ohhh.. "living plastic" is so hip these days..:S

[TJ]

Very good Naomi. Conformity is forced onto us from birth

[Helpless]

nicely done! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

First off never criticize your work... how can you expect others to believe in what you write if you don't...
I like the statement this poem makes. Tackling how we feel we must conform in order to be accepted. If people don't love you for who you are then that would be there loss.

[Coffee Vampier]

Don't worry i am suffering as well XD It have a very good underline idea and i love the way you pulled in together!

[Kiari Sabon]

i like it
my fav part is "Let me go inside your mind for just a second, little
girl."
i dont often let people in my head only once did i fully let someone i my head

[Judas Hammer]

Very good....I felt this.. Never let them see how
you are or they might
hate you too. this is an awesome quote......very nice

[brenda]

this is really good !!:) i like this one !!