Nothing.
A Poem by
Naomi Roseღ
I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...
Everything
that had
potential
happiness
is dead.
Everything
we used to
make this
dream come
true is gone.
All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never
existed.
The pure fear
I felt when I
saw it was true,
died when you
died.
There is nothing
left to hold.
There is nothing
left to cry about.
There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.
There is no
more of
you.
© 2011 Naomi Roseღ
Author's Note
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.
Reviews
Bracing and intellectuality stimulating, well done
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a great poem. There is a lot of emotion in it. I like that in a poem.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a great poem. There is a lot of emotion in it. I like that in a poem.
It's a poem...screw grammar
Posted 13 Years Ago
It's a poem...screw grammar
You've got a pretty long arm there, Naomi
Posted 13 Years Ago
You've got a pretty long arm there, Naomi
alot of talent showing through on this, nice work!
Posted 13 Years Ago
alot of talent showing through on this, nice work!
This is truely a great piece, heart breaking. Hang in there.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is truely a great piece, heart breaking. Hang in there.
Who cares about grammar? It's irrelevant. All I know is that you're hurting right now and you shouldn't be.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Who cares about grammar? It's irrelevant. All I know is that you're hurting right now and you shouldn't be.
this is great, please feel better :(
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is great, please feel better :(
if it truly comes from your heart, it doesn't matter about the grammar or spelling.
~Lizzard~
Posted 13 Years Ago
if it truly comes from your heart, it doesn't matter about the grammar or spelling.
~Lizzard~
This is a sad write. It's good to just let your words out..don't care about grammar at the moment..
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a sad write. It's good to just let your words out..don't care about grammar at the moment..
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