Nothing.

I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...

Everything

that had

potential

happiness

is dead.

Everything 

we used to 

make this 

dream come

true is gone.

All of the

words we whispered

to each other in

the night never

existed. 

The pure fear

I felt when I 

saw it was true,

died when you

died.

There is nothing

left to hold.

There is nothing

left to cry about.

There are no more

kisses and hugs

and hope.

There is no 

more of 

you. 

Author's Note

I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.

Reviews

[compositionc]

It's sad. But so full of emotion.
:)
I hope you are okay.

[Spiral Panda]

Sometimes we have to place the hope we had stored in another strictly into ourselves, because at least if things go wrong with them, they won't with us, as in meaning, we will still be able to smile with heart at life. Don't give up, because you're closer than you realize to getting there.

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

I like the short lines. They really add to the powerful emotions in this poem.

[TheRavenQueer]

Wow...
This is so beautiful.
Well done. :)
Hope you're OK though.

[XxtaintedxX]

I love this, it reminds me of my life right now. Great emotion(:

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem with a sad story. I like how you begin with each set of line with hope and ended with sadness. A powerful ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

:/
I hope you are okay..
Great heartfelt poem xx

[∂αʌ<..]

grammar?...no need...
the impact of the phrases themselves are worth each word in this poem!
great write!!!

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

I could see this as more of a "spoken word" piece than a poem
Kind of free-form which I do enjoy. The aggressive flow of emotion and stature throughout.
A very dark write, which as you can tell, is my favourite style
Keep it up and keep sending RR's