Nothing.
A Poem by
Naomi Roseღ
I wrote this on my arm with a purple Sharpie when I was in the hospital today...
Everything
that had
potential
happiness
is dead.
Everything
we used to
make this
dream come
true is gone.
All of the
words we whispered
to each other in
the night never
existed.
The pure fear
I felt when I
saw it was true,
died when you
died.
There is nothing
left to hold.
There is nothing
left to cry about.
There are no more
kisses and hugs
and hope.
There is no
more of
you.
© 2011 Naomi Roseღ
Author's Note
I know the grammar is horrible. I don't care.
Reviews
This is an excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Amazing poem!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Amazing poem!!
wow! this is son intense!!! its a beautiful piece, full of emotion and longing!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow! this is son intense!!! its a beautiful piece, full of emotion and longing!!!
The grammar doesn't matter. I know I read this late, but still hope ur alright!
Posted 13 Years Ago
The grammar doesn't matter. I know I read this late, but still hope ur alright!
nice
Posted 13 Years Ago
nice
this is very moving, it's a wonderful masterpiece
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is very moving, it's a wonderful masterpiece
Awh ): this is so sad, my grammer is way worse, so no worries. This is pretty. I hope your okay (:
Posted 13 Years Ago
Awh ): this is so sad, my grammer is way worse, so no worries. This is pretty. I hope your okay (:
awesome! I love dark! you made dark beautiful. forget the grammer. Its about emotion
Posted 13 Years Ago
awesome! I love dark! you made dark beautiful. forget the grammer. Its about emotion
this is really sad and i suck at grammar so i cant really judge i can relate to this really well written!
Posted 13 Years Ago
this is really sad and i suck at grammar so i cant really judge i can relate to this really well written!
You take the human heart into your palm squeeze it into submission until you make the reader feel what you want them to feel. Powerful work. I was struck with grief from your loss, but, still...I would never dare to claim to understand how you feel. Remember the good times.
Posted 13 Years Ago
You take the human heart into your palm squeeze it into submission until you make the reader feel what you want them to feel. Powerful work. I was struck with grief from your loss, but, still...I would never dare to claim to understand how you feel. Remember the good times.
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