Prologue.

The prologue is here! Sorry it took long to write. And sorry for the shortness. The chapters will be better.

  I got the call when Leigh and I were done making love. Our hair was messy, our cheeks were colored red and our legs were still tangled with each other in the messy sheets. 

  Leigh's parents weren't home. They were at work. 

  Her blond hair brushed my bare chest and I asked softly, "how was it?"

  Leigh smiled up at me. "Perfect, Taylor," she tells me. Then she leans over and kisses me softly on the lips. 

   The whole thing was perfect. She was perfect. But I guess all perfect things have to end.

   My cell phone, which I put in my jean pocket (which was on the floor) started vibrating. 

   I sat up and moved over the the edge of the bed and picked up my jeans. I pulled my cell phone out of its pocket and it answered it without checking call display on the fourth ring.

   "Hello?" I asked the caller. 

    "Taylor," a stressed female voice replied. It was my Mom. "Something happened."

    I gripped the phone in my hand harder. "What happened?" I asked.

    "Something bad," she replied. "There was an accident. Are you at Leigh's house?"

Author's Note

Review please.
Do you think I should continue this book?

Reviews

[compositionc]

HELLS YEAH.
I love how it starts off, but you have a small grammatical error:
IN DIALOGUE-
"Taylor", You seem you put the comma outside the quotation, which doesn't really make all that much sense, but it should be:

"Taylor," The comma belongs inside the quotations.

[amdc101]

Absolutely! You can't just leave us all hanging like that!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

yes continue the book. We can't really get a feel of the book just yet, you need to continue the story so that the reader can tell if they would like to read it or not. So yes, continue!

[Jake Staffeld]

Continue it. It's a good prologue, it catches the reader.

[KillerXonXmove]

Good start. I liked it. Thanks for sharing..

[ChicagoMay]

What happened?? More please!

[Juliet]

Keep writing please please please!

[.Lost Soul.]

tell me what happens nexttttt that was extremly good i wanna hear moreee

[Madrykson]

Keep writing and working with it, but might want to vary your sentence structure. Good set-up for suspense!

[Short.Nerd]

Very good:)

[brenda]

omg ok what happens next its good great flow!!