This is not bad! Stop saying your work is bad when it's clearly immense! I can relate to it, and I'm sure many others can! So just chill :P your work is amazing :) x
i think this is really good! it seems to have a somewhat strange structure but i really like the emotoin behind this and the message! so many ppl, especially young women, can relate to things and feelings like these. i'm sure they feel this is almost speaking to them
Love is just a tricky thing in general, one does so many things in the name of love and yet they sometimes aren't the right things to do. A touching piece
This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:
This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:
This isn't bad, I love it. But I agree with Derek, you deserve better. So I know I've said this before...and you've probably got a million better people, but if you ever need to talk or just vent then I'm here (:
Welcome to my world!
So, as you see my name is Naomi Rose. Other people may know me as Naomi the lost the ninja. Or just as plain old Naomi XP.
I am fifteen years young (bahaha).
I write poems a .. more..