Where am I?

Where am I?

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I don't belong
  in my house, where
  people's looks are like
  nails in your eyes.
  I don't belong in 
  my school, where
  rumors spread like
  mosquitoes.
  I don't belong in
  my skin, where
  I always feel
  out of place.
  Where do I belong?
  Where do I have to
  run to?
  Who do I have to
  run to?
  Answer the questions
  before it starts again. 
  
   

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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So emotional. I enjoyed reading this, your feelings on a piece of paper, like wearing your heart on a sleeve.

Posted 13 Years Ago


the last two lines really delicate the meaning of the prose, well done, good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Now I loved this one,
So well written and said.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Woman strong and straight
Wear your badge with pride
The girl of this moment will blossom into
A force no place can hide:)


Posted 13 Years Ago


nicely done, Like I said in our discussions you are not alone in feeling like this. As a matter a fact Everyone has felt as you do. Don't give up sweete.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think we all can relate, dear. good job with communicating emotions!

Posted 13 Years Ago


:(
I really like this poem and i think i like it so much is because i can relate.
This poem is very weel-written!
I love it :)
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2011
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Tags: Poetry, out of place, depression, short

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