Where am I?
A Poem by
Naomi Roseღ
I don't belong
in my house, where
people's looks are like
nails in your eyes.
I don't belong in
my school, where
rumors spread like
mosquitoes.
I don't belong in
my skin, where
I always feel
out of place.
Where do I belong?
Where do I have to
run to?
Who do I have to
run to?
Answer the questions
before it starts again.
© 2011 Naomi Roseღ
Reviews
So emotional. I enjoyed reading this, your feelings on a piece of paper, like wearing your heart on a sleeve.
Posted 13 Years Ago
the last two lines really delicate the meaning of the prose, well done, good read.
Posted 13 Years Ago
the last two lines really delicate the meaning of the prose, well done, good read.
Now I loved this one,
So well written and said.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Now I loved this one,
So well written and said.
Woman strong and straight
Wear your badge with pride
The girl of this moment will blossom into
A force no place can hide:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
Woman strong and straight
Wear your badge with pride
The girl of this moment will blossom into
A force no place can hide:)
nicely done, Like I said in our discussions you are not alone in feeling like this. As a matter a fact Everyone has felt as you do. Don't give up sweete.
Posted 13 Years Ago
nicely done, Like I said in our discussions you are not alone in feeling like this. As a matter a fact Everyone has felt as you do. Don't give up sweete.
I think we all can relate, dear. good job with communicating emotions!
Posted 13 Years Ago
I think we all can relate, dear. good job with communicating emotions!
:(
I really like this poem and i think i like it so much is because i can relate.
This poem is very weel-written!
I love it :)
100/100
Posted 13 Years Ago
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I really like this poem and i think i like it so much is because i can relate.
This poem is very weel-written!
I love it :)
100/100
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