Unlike other reviewers I have never felt like this, yet this poem brings the emotion to life. It is a powerful poem. If your doing this when your a teenager, what will you be doing when you are in your 40'?
Life give us opportunity to find a place where we will learn peace and calm one day. I understand this poem. I seem to be in the wrong place and stuck in the mud.I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote
Welcome to my world!
So, as you see my name is Naomi Rose. Other people may know me as Naomi the lost the ninja. Or just as plain old Naomi XP.
I am fifteen years young (bahaha).
I write poems a .. more..