You hurt me, but I'm okay.
A Poem by
Naomi Roseღ
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I wipe my tear stained
eyes and tell
the reflection
of myself "I'm alright".
I forget about you
and your lies and
how you used
me.
I walk out and
when people see
my red eyes and
messy hair
I tell them "I am OK".
And when I see you
standing there,
looking at me, how
bad you hurt me
I will look away.
© 2011 Naomi Roseღ
Reviews
"When you look at me with how bad you hurt me, I'll look away.." Sometimes you have to do that, sort of walk out on all that before that made you feel like something, because once you get damaged enough by it you need the release.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I've felt like this a million times before :/ I love how easy this flowed for you. Amazing, as usual (:
Posted 13 Years Ago
I've felt like this a million times before :/ I love how easy this flowed for you. Amazing, as usual (:
Sometime hard to hide the sadness. We go forward and do our best. I like the way you wrote the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sometime hard to hide the sadness. We go forward and do our best. I like the way you wrote the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote
0 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Witjh love comes hurt I wrote a poem titled "Along with Roses Thorns Abide" this says the same but in a different more personal way
Posted 13 Years Ago
Witjh love comes hurt I wrote a poem titled "Along with Roses Thorns Abide" this says the same but in a different more personal way
this was really amazing!
alltid
-Meja
Posted 13 Years Ago
this was really amazing!
alltid
-Meja
This was hard to read, but written with honesty.
It was sad, but penned with great emotion.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was hard to read, but written with honesty.
It was sad, but penned with great emotion.
powerful and emotional. Very good write
Posted 13 Years Ago
powerful and emotional. Very good write
I'm sorry girlie. Boys at teen years aren't always sweet and spice like they are as mature adults later in life.
~Lizzard~
Posted 13 Years Ago
I'm sorry girlie. Boys at teen years aren't always sweet and spice like they are as mature adults later in life.
~Lizzard~
this was very sad, but you wrote it beautifully. i have been where you are and it sucks, but things will get better.
Posted 13 Years Ago
this was very sad, but you wrote it beautifully. i have been where you are and it sucks, but things will get better.
This was a sad write, but you are reassuring yourself that you're okay. All you need to be is okay. I can feel everything you are feeling in this poem. So for that you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This was a sad write, but you are reassuring yourself that you're okay. All you need to be is okay. I can feel everything you are feeling in this poem. So for that you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.
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