You hurt me, but I'm okay.

You hurt me, but I'm okay.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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  I wipe my tear stained
  eyes and tell
  the reflection 
  of myself "I'm alright".
  I forget about you
  and your lies and
  how you used
  me.

  I walk out and 
  when people see
  my red eyes and
  messy hair
  I tell them "I am OK".

  And when I see you
  standing there,
  looking at me, how
  bad you hurt me
  I will look away. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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"When you look at me with how bad you hurt me, I'll look away.." Sometimes you have to do that, sort of walk out on all that before that made you feel like something, because once you get damaged enough by it you need the release.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've felt like this a million times before :/ I love how easy this flowed for you. Amazing, as usual (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometime hard to hide the sadness. We go forward and do our best. I like the way you wrote the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Witjh love comes hurt I wrote a poem titled "Along with Roses Thorns Abide" this says the same but in a different more personal way

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was really amazing!
alltid
-Meja

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was hard to read, but written with honesty.
It was sad, but penned with great emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


powerful and emotional. Very good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm sorry girlie. Boys at teen years aren't always sweet and spice like they are as mature adults later in life.

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was very sad, but you wrote it beautifully. i have been where you are and it sucks, but things will get better.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was a sad write, but you are reassuring yourself that you're okay. All you need to be is okay. I can feel everything you are feeling in this poem. So for that you did a great job. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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