You hurt me, but I'm okay.

You hurt me, but I'm okay.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ
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  I wipe my tear stained
  eyes and tell
  the reflection 
  of myself "I'm alright".
  I forget about you
  and your lies and
  how you used
  me.

  I walk out and 
  when people see
  my red eyes and
  messy hair
  I tell them "I am OK".

  And when I see you
  standing there,
  looking at me, how
  bad you hurt me
  I will look away. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


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this is really good...(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice poem.It expresses the feelings of the situation exactly.gud work


Posted 13 Years Ago


Exactly how I've been feeling lately. I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


you capture feelings really well...
shrt and hit home right away!
wow!

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) Speechless

Posted 13 Years Ago


OOO WOW
I liked & enjoyed this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really good (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can totally relate to this. Great poem x

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice job:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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