WOW talk about a poem that I couldn't have read at a better time.....It really speaks to me cu i understand how it feels...it hurts to watch the one you like/love, love/like someone else
Nice job :)
Repetitive in the sense you said the same thing, but by no means was that a bad thing. It MADE the poem. If it wasn't there, this wouldn't exist. I'm sorry you feel that way.
This is as the saing goes it is better to have loved and loss than never to have loved at all universal in its appeal and timeless in it's disappointment
A direct to the point poem. Sometime we don't support to have all what we need and want. Some people are keepers and some people are runners. You poetry is NO. 1 with me. A excellent poem.
Coyote
Its heart breaking to watch someone you feel so deeply about walk away with someone else, i know exactly how you feel....but i'm sure their are going to be tooons of better guys out there who would kill to be with you. Great work...simple and to the point.
Awh ): don't feel terrible. I'm sorry :/ I know how you feel and it sucks :/ but if he don't want you then he's just not good enough. No person is if they hurt you. Remember that okay?
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