I know I'm insane.

I know I'm insane.

A Poem by Naomi Roseღ

  I know my brain
  has issues,
  I know I am crazy.

  I know I should be
  locked up in a padded
  room with eight other
  rapists trying to
  kill each other.

  But darling, I've heard
  your insults before
  and they just don't work.

  You're stuck with me
  whether you like it or not.

  I put up with b*****s like
  you everyday,
  so shut up
  and play you're own game. 

© 2011 Naomi Roseღ


Author's Note

Naomi Roseღ
I wrote this when I was about...ten? Lol. I know its bad.

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i think all of us true artist think that they are crazy at one point of another, because of the fact that we are talented and creative. they are the ones who are crazy, the ones who can't see the beauty around them in this world

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's not bad it's wonderful and I love it!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.

No no no. This is good! It's not bad at all. I love it. And I love the picture to! Great job (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ugh, I feel like this all the time! But it's good to let your anger out by writing than by violence or doing other things that aren't good for you. Just hold your head up high and know that you're so much better than them. Don't EVER let anyone bring you down and let the sun shine :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Life will teach you one day. Better to keep negative private. When you allow other people to piss you off. You become a fool too. Best to not pay attention to words that mean little to you. A wise person always have control of emotion and their life. A strong poem with anger as the point.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I can relate so much to this piece. You wrote this when you were 10? Its kind of f*****g amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This isn't as bad as you thought. I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is a good poem for ten year old lol.
I love it.
It's cute and awesome.
It describes me. :D
Thanks for sharing. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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